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Yao soars, but undermanned Rockets sink [MSNBC]

Discussion in 'Houston Rockets: Game Action & Roster Moves' started by sabonis, Mar 23, 2006.

  1. sabonis

    sabonis Member

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    Didn't see this posted and it really doesn't say anything new, but figured it's a article to pass the time before the game tonight... Yao soars, but undermanned Rockets sink, from MSNBC

    Stuart

     
  2. Rasselas

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    The content is fine, but this piece is awfully written. Jeesh. Inconsistent voice, no structure, and some embarrassing constructions.
     
  3. pradaxpimp

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    Thank you, Dan Brown. :D j/k
     
  4. Rasselas

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    Don't get me started on him! ;)

    (btw -- my writing certainly isn't any better than this article...but then again, I'm not getting paid to write for MSNBC. just like i can rip Boggans for not hitting a 3 even though I couldn't drain one to save my life.)
     
  5. Hakeem06

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    i agree, the article just doesn't flow nicely together. i've written better stuff on a 1 1/2 hour deadline. obviously this guy had more time than that to put this together, it's not a time sensative piece.

    did they just hire this guy right out of college or what? there are people on the staff at the student paper i work at that put better stuff together than this.

    it's blogesque.
     
  6. topfive

    topfive CF OG

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    Or spell it, for that matter. ;)
     
  7. tikwanleap

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    It was written by Matt Goukas.
     

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