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  1. Jeff

    Jeff Clutch Crew

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    Little help checking for proofreading errors, browser glitches, etc...

    http://www.tworoadsmedia.com/

    You guys make great beta testers. :)

    The text is still being re-written but it's pretty close. Thanks as always.
     
    #1 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
  2. Behad

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    On the staff page, under Clutch's description, you have "formiddable"...I believe there is only one "d"
     
    #2 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
  3. Behad

    Behad Member

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    In fact, the entire sentence is not quite right:
    His skill as a database specialist and web developer are formiddable

    "skill" is singular, but you use the plural "are"....should be "skills" OR "is"
     
    #3 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
  4. Jeff

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    Cool. Thanks!
     
    #4 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
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    Jeff this is by far the cleanest site you've designed yet!
    I like the thud sounds when you cross the mouse over the links.:D

    I haven't found anything I don't like about it yet, but if I do I'll be sure and...oh hey, I didn't see a "HOME" button when I went to the other pages. Had to back out arrow to "HOME", but thats a no biggie.

    Other than that, superb job!:)
     
    #5 mr_oily, Jul 23, 2002
  6. Jeff

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    Thanks. I forgot to link the logo at the top back to the front page. I'll do that.

    This was very much a team effort between myself, Clutch and rocketeer with Clutch and rocketeer doing the bulk of the work which is why it looks so damn good. :D
     
    #6 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
  7. Behad

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    One more thing, if I may (I'm bored today):

    How about changing "But, the internet is a vast space with a myriad of different disciplines needed to take it from confusing to usable"

    to

    But the internet is a vast space needing a myriad of different disciplines to take it from confusing to usable

    Or better still, change needing to requiring

    Just a suggestion.
     
    #7 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
  8. Jeff

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    Good suggestion. Like I said, the text isn't done yet. It is going to be edited a lot over the next couple of days. I'll keep that one in mind.
     
    #8 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
  9. Behad

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    On the Web Solutions page, "dissemenating" is spelled wrong. The second e should be an i



    Told you I was bored today! :)
     
    #9 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
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    It's really clean and nice! Great work!
     
    #10 Iron McFist, Jul 23, 2002
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    beautiful job again!!!

    under Clutch's bio...

    The site recieves - - i before e except after c


    BRUTAL -

    We create a master plan that provides you with everything you will need to have a website that impresses your customers and embarrasses your competition.
    :D
     
    #11 rockHEAD, Jul 23, 2002
  12. Behad

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    #12 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
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    The pay phone picture in the contact area.........was there an alternative image that was contemplated?



    Mango
     
    #13 Mango, Jul 23, 2002
  14. Behad

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    On the same page as my last post:

    This sentence under Pre Development is awkward:

    In the pre-development phase, we assemble our team and meet with the you to determine your needs
     
    #14 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
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    Another nit-picky suggestion: take the 'different' out completely. The word 'myriad' already has the connotation of "many and varied" so I think 'different' is a tad redundant.

    Nothing grammatically incorrect, just a matter of preference.
     
    #15 deepellumrocket, Jul 23, 2002
  16. bobrek

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    Atheists and others may be offended by the term 'God-send' to describe Dave Cebrero. (Perhaps 'supreme being-send' or 'nature-send) :)
     
    #16 bobrek, Jul 23, 2002
  17. Jeff

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    Behad: Thanks for all the proofreading. Mrs JB is the expert on writing, not me. Notice no errors from the company.html page - the one she did. :)

    rockHEAD: I fogot about the "brutal" sentence. That won't stay. I was actually writing that around 3am and was out of my mind! :)

    Mango: I actually like that photo! :)

    deepellum: Thanks for the suggestion.

    As always, guys, thanks so much.
     
    #17 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
  18. ROCKSS

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    Jeff,
    The link does not seem to be working {2:50pm cst}
     
    #18 ROCKSS, Jul 23, 2002
  19. Jeff

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    Try just the IP address:

    http://65.57.231.62
     
    #19 Jeff, Jul 23, 2002
  20. Behad

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    I did notice.:D

    "forgot" is spelled wrong.

    I guess I'm getting carried away, huh?
     
    #20 Behad, Jul 23, 2002
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